What's that mark upon your arm?
Some ink perhaps?
Oh no, what's that!
A big blue-black bruise?
Oh my, what a bruise!
Pray, what was the cause
Or the occasion
That created such a god-awful lesion?
Intended contact?
Or mere unwitting mishap?
But wait,
Oh great mother-
Do I spy ANOTHER?
Oh quick, fetch the ice
We'll have them gone in a trice!
Now really, my dear
There is nothing to fear.
No need to gape,
No foul play, no, not rape!
Just a silly old mark,
Nothing sinister or dark,
Although, I must say
(Should I really say?)
That bruises, well they
Have some kind of sway...
And now I'm so fond
Of blemish, of blood,
I wear them with pride -
Dear, don't look so horrified!
Just why I don't know,
I don't do it for show.
It's a personal pleasure,
One could call it leisure...
Oh, leaving so soon?
How inopportune!
Let me show you the door,
But please, come once more.
Sunday, July 27, 2008
Bruise
Posted by Sapphira at 8:18 AM
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hehe
as usual the writing's really good
haha love the style :D
the content was pretty interesting too
though towards the end it reminded me of Reeve's emo phase :P
hahaha
post some more!
hmmm shru.
don't you should say 'hickeys' instead of bruises?
or did i misinterpret??
Hahaha no B, it's not about hickeys!
hmm cute...hehe and to the 1st comment...i think "phase' is what describes it best :P
Really? I think its great, the words, the skill, the meaning. You keep building words into phrases that bring about pure legit awesomeness. Keep writing.
Mwaaaah !!
firstly shru... well written but i remember what u said last week and hehe it still scares me but ur cool anyway ;)
imaad. reeve was not a phase, its him
beroze. hickeys? lol
Hehe I take great pleasure in scaring you Ahamed :)
yes i can see that ;)
hey! its mine to choose how i interpret it!!!
and clearly u don't know shru all that well..hehhe
just kidding shru, don't kill me.
It's a personal pleasure,
One could call it leisure...
self mutilation?:P
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